Author Topic: When I'm with him.  (Read 2849 times)

Offline KitsuneNoYume

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When I'm with him.
« on: April 14, 2008, 09:58:45 PM »
When I'm with him, the world fades, and time seems to disappear.
He always makes me smile and laugh.
I can't see myself with anyone but him.
Sound seems to become silent, and all I hear is him and I.

When I'm with him...bright lights become dimmed and I see his beautiful face.
His gorgeous brown eyes, and his bright smile.
Those soft lips, I long to kiss. His tender skin, I long to touch.

When I'm with him...Everyone in the world fades, no one can bother us, in our world of each other. One day we'll be together....but for now, I can only dream of his love, and wait till that day comes.

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Re: When I'm with him.
« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2008, 01:44:53 AM »
wow another great poem!

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Re: When I'm with him.
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2008, 03:22:38 PM »
tehe thank youu =)

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Re: When I'm with him.
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2008, 08:31:43 AM »
Whoa, that's one super long line there at the end!

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Re: When I'm with him.
« Reply #4 on: June 02, 2008, 10:08:13 AM »
Whoa, that's one super long line there at the end!

haha. danielle, thats how i reacted too.


but anywayy.
I loved it ^.^
I can definitely relate to it.
and when I was reading it, it made me smile ^.^

 

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