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Offline KitsuneNoYume

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Another untitled
« on: April 09, 2008, 08:39:33 PM »
This is another writing like my previous one I wrote, enjoy.


Take my hand, it's over now.
I'll never hurt you, like she did you.
I'll take your heart, and nurture it.
I'll take your heart, and treasure it.
I'll take your heart, and love it.


You take my hand, it's over now.
I know you'll never hurt me, like he did.
I know you'll steal my heart and nurture it.
I know you'll steal my heart and treasure it.
I know you'll take my heart and love it.


It's our new start, new beginning.
It's our fresh new slate.
We have a chance, to do things different.
Lets take this moment before it's gone.
We'll stay together until the end.

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Re: Another untitled
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2008, 04:35:38 PM »
*stickies for POW*

You know...you might want to title these things.  Try using the same word in a different language.  Or scramble the letters. 


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Re: Another untitled
« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2008, 09:29:58 PM »
Hmmm mkays.
I shall try that.

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Re: Another untitled
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2008, 01:47:14 AM »
i really like this