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Offline KitsuneNoYume

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untitled.
« on: March 14, 2008, 11:16:49 PM »
Don't mind this with my punctuation or other errors just a spur of the moment writing thing. Constructive criticism would be nice if you have any.

He gives these little signs away
but then the next day
they seem to have gone astray

I don't understand
hes confusing me from my point at which I see
But lately it's been more, and more little signs.
What's he trying to tell me?


And tonight I'm sure I'm right.
He does feel for me, even if it's a little.
it's still there.

he told me the places he wants to take me, the things he wants to do
to make me happy...

Wild butterflies stir in the pits of my stomach.
new arousals come forth, nervous with anticipation.

It feels so hot,
I feel my face flush

I know I like him, alot more then I did before.






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Re: untitled.
« Reply #1 on: March 17, 2008, 10:00:22 AM »
*POWs*

Woohoo!  A poem for great justice!  Or something.


"My brain told me there was a chair behind me but halfway to the floor, my brain told me it lied." -Me
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Re: untitled.
« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 05:06:36 AM »
nice poem kitsune i really like it

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Re: untitled.
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2008, 05:02:44 PM »
aww! Thank you!!! =)

I feel happy now.

*ish sick*

~Kit ♥

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Re: untitled.
« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2008, 02:02:46 PM »
Literally sick?  Feel better.


"My brain told me there was a chair behind me but halfway to the floor, my brain told me it lied." -Me
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Re: untitled.
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2008, 06:41:57 PM »
Yes.*sigh* From monday morning till thursday night. And I have no clue what I was sick with. T_T Thank you though!

I should have more writings posted up soon.

~Kit ♥

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« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2008, 01:57:06 AM »
looking forward to it and its good that you got bettre already ^^