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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #15 on: June 07, 2007, 01:14:39 PM »
Jaden is the type of man who's nice, but can get really mean if he gets jealous. But don't worry Amachi will have a happy ending in the end, I'm going to make him kind of the main character of this story and then reintroduce Manaka, because I feel Amachi didn't get that much of a role and people are left wondering of what he has become.
Chapter 2: Being With You

Toujou pursed then bit her lips as; she stared at the invitation with a gentle worried and passive look on her face. Could she go? Slowly, she sighed unhappily.

'Manaka-kun. . .' Sighing again with a huff, she got up and gazed at her room. Staring at her achievements, awards, and recognition she had received, she realized all of this was thanks to Manaka. He was her inspiration, her fire, and her bright light in the darkness. Like a guardian angel, he seemed to be there for her all the time, that was exactly the Manaka she had come to fall in love with.

So why was reading the invitation giving her the feeling of crawling in her bed, and just staying for three years?

Looking at the letter she read it carefully. Angrily for the first time out of jealously she tossed the letter before her eyes could even peer over it, as she felt tears drip out of her as she felt her eyes water and she let it all out.

"I love you Manaka-kun!"
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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #16 on: June 07, 2007, 10:26:24 PM »
oh and doesnt toujou fit with an eatern guy than a western guy? ???

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« Reply #17 on: June 08, 2007, 06:24:33 AM »
poor him...

waiting the next chapter maybe?  ;D

good writing..
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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #18 on: June 08, 2007, 07:11:08 PM »
Haha Jaden is white, but he's one of those white people you see in Anime where they're blond and in some cases act like asians. If you get what I mean haha! And thanks for commenting, it makes my reasoning to make more and more chapters fun  ;)
Chapter 2: Being With You

Toujou pursed then bit her lips as; she stared at the invitation with a gentle worried and passive look on her face. Could she go? Slowly, she sighed unhappily.

'Manaka-kun. . .' Sighing again with a huff, she got up and gazed at her room. Staring at her achievements, awards, and recognition she had received, she realized all of this was thanks to Manaka. He was her inspiration, her fire, and her bright light in the darkness. Like a guardian angel, he seemed to be there for her all the time, that was exactly the Manaka she had come to fall in love with.

So why was reading the invitation giving her the feeling of crawling in her bed, and just staying for three years?

Looking at the letter she read it carefully. Angrily for the first time out of jealously she tossed the letter before her eyes could even peer over it, as she felt tears drip out of her as she felt her eyes water and she let it all out.

"I love you Manaka-kun!"
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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #19 on: June 10, 2007, 02:26:25 AM »
thanks also for making such good stories oh and can i have a copy of it?

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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #20 on: June 13, 2007, 02:29:17 AM »
hey your story is absolutely interesting!!
once you finished, can i have a copy??
before yanime is closed..
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« Reply #21 on: July 02, 2008, 04:20:16 PM »
nice one but could have been wonder full if the story was writen in a proper way... it seems you don't have much experience in writing fanfictions just see mine for example..
http://ichigo-100-fanfiction.blogspot.com/
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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #22 on: July 07, 2008, 06:07:39 AM »
before yanime is closed..

Quite optimistic, there.


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« Reply #23 on: July 07, 2008, 05:41:06 PM »
agreed well im hoping that it wont

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Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
« Reply #24 on: February 16, 2010, 03:30:59 AM »
hey, let's make yanime alive, again, like before..  :'(

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