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Dream of Paradise
« on: April 01, 2005, 08:16:05 PM »
Dream Of Paradise
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Living in the peak of unwilling dreams.
In the mist of my past and future
I see your face reflecting my cries and screams.

Reaching for what I only visualize

I search for your laughter and tears.
In the lightest of day and darkest of night
I search for days, months, and years.

Someday we will together see this wondrous moonrise

The screams filling my head.
Every night I only cry in grief.
When will I have you as said?

These tears and screams are enough for me to die

I hear your voice each night.
I dream of your soft brown hair each day.
I pray of your voice to shine so bright.

Sing to me, sing me a song till day comes nigh

Allow me to feel this joy for one last time.
I awake soon from this dream
this dream of you and our paradise.

Goodnight, goodnight my darling and goodbye.



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Re: Dream of Paradise
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2005, 06:33:31 PM »
I love it. It has emotion, it has depth, it freaking made me cry. I hope to see even moooore!  ;D

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Re: Dream of Paradise
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2005, 12:35:32 PM »
Ack, I should've read this sooner!  The poem's great and super, super sad. 

*gives Lost a bag of candy*

*stickies poem for POW*


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Re: Dream of Paradise
« Reply #3 on: May 04, 2005, 05:25:32 PM »
Aww, I wasn't here when this had gotten powed. XP

Thank you both!

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Re: Dream of Paradise
« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2005, 07:03:28 PM »
Yeah, I accidently kept it up for an extra day but I never saw a response from you.  I was wondering if you didn't care or something.


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Re: Dream of Paradise
« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 07:31:44 PM »
I've been busy with life.
So much work and sadly no play.

I haven't even had much time to work on that short story. (Although I have been trying to fit in time.)
I have to write a play, a story, a science paper, and a history paper for school.
In fact right now I'm only taking a tiny break.

 

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