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Offline Akashi

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Some drawings...
« on: March 10, 2005, 03:06:26 PM »
These are two drawings I made some time ago. 8)
Anyway, this is the first time I posted some of my drawings on the net so opinions and critics are welcome ;D

http://img4.imagevenue.com/img.php?loc=loc179&image=467_Gescanntes_Foto_1_10.jpeg

http://img4.imagevenue.com/img.php?loc=loc263&image=61a_Gescanntes_Foto_3_3.jpeg
« Last Edit: March 10, 2005, 03:27:51 PM by Akashi »

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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #1 on: March 10, 2005, 05:37:11 PM »
Awesome pictures, but I think the right arm is a little too far back on the second picture.

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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2005, 01:17:47 AM »
I like them both! First one is my fav though.

You got the face down pretty well, but you need to make the hair look a little smoother. It looks like it's made out of clay or something. Not saying it's bad, but it could be refined a lil more.

All in all, good job *thumbs up!*
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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2005, 07:48:19 AM »
Nice pics, One thing though, I see that you smear for shading which is absolutly fine, but when your working on a very detailed picture, Its better not to use smearing for shadows, try lines or scribbles or something. Well, thats just my opinion.
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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2005, 01:59:14 AM »
you've got talent ;) I just think you should work a tad on the anatomy otherwise I was awed for a noob :D

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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2005, 04:17:03 AM »
Work more on ur hands and the hair..

draw the hair more realistic will be good.

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Re: Some drawings...
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2005, 10:01:36 AM »
I hink using smearing as shadows is not that good.... kinda looks like bruises if you think about it.
Oh well the drawing is great, the smearing just kinda takes it off.
Keep it up though ^_^

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