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Unbalanced love
« on: March 07, 2005, 06:53:10 PM »
Torn apart by an unbalanced love.
Each side thirsting for my love.
Each day I ask who but never choose.
I only wait for my love to come.
Never searching for love myself.
These chains tugging on both sides.
Tied in tasteless pain,
never choosing  who to set me free.
I look at his angelic eyes
and hear her graceful laugh.
Torn apart by an unbalanced love.
Each side withering away as I await.

Stupid Jennifer. Why the hell do I have to love you so much? >_>

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2005, 10:04:20 AM »
 ;D nice work. Very sad though. Two loves awww.

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2005, 03:34:13 PM »
I notice you repeat some parts like lines and bits of lines, which makes it pretty cool. 

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2005, 03:50:31 PM »
Thank you. ^.^ My poetry isn't the best, but I like it otherwise.
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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2005, 03:56:29 PM »
Ritz, that is so cool! Sad, but cool!  ;)

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #5 on: March 08, 2005, 07:00:42 PM »
Solution: Threesome

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2005, 09:17:11 PM »
THat is an awesome suggestion Were. Listen to Were she knows what she is talking about  ;D

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2005, 05:21:13 PM »
Wow, that's an odd name to call her.  I don't know anyone here that even calls her weredragon...


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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2005, 06:02:42 PM »
Zack used to call me were. Or maybe that was Jason.

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #9 on: March 09, 2005, 06:07:37 PM »
And the guy at the post office called you war-dragon...


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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #10 on: March 10, 2005, 09:26:23 AM »
Well I don't know Were's real name so what do you expect me to call her

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #11 on: March 10, 2005, 01:51:22 PM »
Well my name is Shaina and everyone just calls me that, I don't usually go by nicknames.

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #12 on: March 10, 2005, 01:59:21 PM »
Okay then Shiana......feels so weird sayin that.

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Re: Unbalanced love
« Reply #13 on: March 10, 2005, 02:04:44 PM »
I don't usually go by nicknames.

Adrianna calls you slut and stuff though...


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