Author Topic: Light (cabbit's current poem thread)  (Read 3984 times)

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Re: Light
« Reply #15 on: February 09, 2005, 05:45:56 PM »
I guess that means you don't think they are good enough...


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Re: Light
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2005, 05:50:41 PM »
..lol. I don't like much I write o.o;
I don't think much of it makes sense XD; *sillyness*

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Re: Light
« Reply #17 on: February 09, 2005, 05:53:44 PM »
I don't think many people like their own things they created... 

*decides to keep it stickied for another week anyway*

Kenohki's POWed thread is no longer his...


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Re: Light
« Reply #18 on: February 09, 2005, 05:54:29 PM »
wow o.o
*so happy* ;-;..

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Re: Light
« Reply #19 on: February 11, 2005, 07:51:58 AM »
Lines and Dots - a title that has no meaning with the poem n.n

You lead me through my life.
Each moment clacks by underneath me.
I am a passenger on some train -
following a track your soul has quietly laid.
I can be a hobo hitching a ride.
I can be a tourist with romantic mind.
or I can be the train, I can be the line.

You occupy my mind.
Thoughts seem disconnected, a spec floating in nothing.
They jump from one another. One to the next.
I am reminded of childrens games.
Thoughts are a giant connect-the-dots.
Those lines surely form your image.
With hundreds of thousands of dots, adding detail with each thought.
It's you. . it's you.

... and I'm so gaga in love I hardly know what to do.. @.@


lala. That last line wasn't really part of the poem.. but, well, sure.

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Re: Light
« Reply #20 on: February 13, 2005, 06:43:13 PM »
Cabbit, those are very well worded and have much meaning. Very well done. The love ones were full of emotion and love.


Kitten-san, those are very Kawaii. They also have meaning and love in everyword.  Good job ^^





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Re: Light
« Reply #21 on: February 14, 2005, 06:50:50 PM »
Awww..thanks <3

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Re: Light
« Reply #22 on: February 14, 2005, 07:00:59 PM »
Yay, everyone gets a fan!  Or more than one...


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Re: Light
« Reply #23 on: February 14, 2005, 07:59:19 PM »
Wants.

I want her to be loved.
I want her to be needed.

I want her in my arms, embracing me with warmth,
   her face pressed to my body, my hand into her hair.

I want her to be heard.
I want her to be free.

I want her in my bed, sprinkled with flower petals,
   loosely draped in silk, desire in her eyes..

I want her to be pleased.
I want her to be happy.

I want to sleep in her lap while she reads,
   drifting into sleep, wrapped tightly in her peace.

I want her to be safe.
I want her to be proud of me.

I want her to be happy.. I want her to be free.


I also  made this picture for her ^.^


We're probably making at least one person ill with our luv-luv stuff.. but give us a break >>;;
« Last Edit: February 14, 2005, 08:00:37 PM by Cabbit »

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Re: Light
« Reply #24 on: February 16, 2005, 08:25:13 AM »
lol.... yeah..


those are really loving and meaningful.... you two must really love each other. lol..... those are really good poems.

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Re: Light (cabbit's current poem thread)
« Reply #25 on: March 10, 2005, 02:07:51 PM »
. . . and she is my heart my life .. my day.
I love her. Her smile is happiness. Her laughter bliss.
. . . and always I stumble for what to say.
To tell her, to show her my heart, my devotion.
Might I buy her flowers.. might I sing and play.
Might I hold her close to me, and never let go
or flatter her with the truth of her beauty,
and make with words symbols for what she means to me.

She is my goddess of the moon, full and bright at clear midnight,
bathing me in blue, cool light.
And the moon of blue will ascend and fall, passions and tides, before the sun will rise and guide me.
She is my goddess of the sun, glowing great at highest noon,
raining upon me joyous warmth
the sun is cooled to passionate red by the sea at sunset. It is her waters gently washing on my shore.

I will hold the moon in my embrace.
I will follow the sun into evening
I will cherish each day and know that she surrounds me.

. . . and she will as always be my world,
and as always I will love her so.

Yet, no metaphor can outshine reality:
When I cry she comforts me.
When blind to truth she helps me see,
and in her face there is beauty,
and in her eyes conviction,
and in her anger morality,
and in her arms, loving peace for me.
« Last Edit: March 10, 2005, 02:21:16 PM by Cabbit »

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Re: Light (cabbit's current poem thread)
« Reply #26 on: March 10, 2005, 02:14:20 PM »
I saw you online and that was odd.  I was hoping your rare appearance meant new poems from you.  I was right!  It's beautiful!

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Re: Light (cabbit's current poem thread)
« Reply #27 on: March 10, 2005, 02:21:39 PM »
fixed some of the structure, same poem, just change punctuation.