Author Topic: Can't let you go  (Read 1518 times)

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Can't let you go
« on: December 12, 2004, 07:35:00 PM »
I lost my creative myself because of past events and am trying to get it back. I wrote this but it has no meaning to it.



How unexpected was this reality I faced,
I wish it was a dream ,
how could I lose someone so precious to me.
Everytime I look at her eyes
I'm reminded of the loving memories we shared,
"together"
I tried to let you go
"but I can't"
because I'm in love with you.
I didn't let you go
because your beautiful like crimsome skies.
I can remember when we sat together
"in the cold"
and held you in my arms.
I will never forget that moment,
it's so precious to me....
Why? did I write those letters to you.
Now look at how we ended up.
I did my best,
you loved me too
I wish she never found those letters....
I tried to let you go
"but I can't"
because I fell for you.
Please...
I can't and won't let go of those Hazle eyes.
So was that last hug we shared
and the sight of your angelic hair
just a reminder that we couldn't be "together"

Offline invincible.

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Re: Can't let you go
« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2004, 11:51:35 PM »
Its beautiful, i liked the adjectives you used ^^

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Re: Can't let you go
« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2004, 06:10:00 AM »
That's so good. Reminds me of someone I loved... lol.. But very well done.

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Re: Can't let you go
« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2004, 01:55:37 PM »
Good, but I have to agree with you on your loss of creativity...

Swim upsteam, for the beginning starts there.