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A new drawing. Take a look!
« on: July 25, 2004, 08:27:50 PM »
http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v346/Cat3R/Autumn_Kali_picture.jpg

This is Kali Craft, the protagonist in R.E.D (Red-Eyed Darkness) in the Fan Writings board. I've had complaints that my drawings had four fingers. Now, they have five. I first used an oval to shapen the hand, and then added the fingers. Drawing hands is slightly easier for me now.

Please, tell me how you think! It was hard drawing her young (she is 12)

Edit: Fixed link. It should be working now!
« Last Edit: July 25, 2004, 08:33:07 PM by PrinJess »

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2004, 02:07:44 AM »
Um cute but lighten up on the lines around her nose and under her eyes. That's too much..

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2004, 05:26:10 AM »
Really? All the lines means she's blushing really hard. I'll tone it down later...

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #3 on: July 26, 2004, 09:46:16 AM »
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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2004, 10:52:20 AM »
your best yet its great.

just one thing, it might sound harsh but ..

looking at her face i see a lot of detail, its obvious you've taken care drawing and colouring it, the rest of the body is great but it seems to lose detail a little in places.

theres just some places where clothing lines and some other little details for bones and textures i think would make it better, thats just what i think.

apart from that i really like i though.  ;D

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2004, 11:45:14 AM »
I realized that after i inked it. (i could have made the shirt puffier at the end) I have to say i'm slightly improving from my mistakes. I should look it over the next time, before i ink it.

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2004, 09:46:35 PM »
why is this locked?

anyway, i'm unlocking it.


it's a nice picture, by the way. you've got talent. i hope you go far with it  ;D


oh and by the way, if you want to add blush to a person's face, you don't always have to draw the lines. you can always add it when coloring by just using the airbrush feature. drawing the lines all over the face tends to make it look a little messy, or sometimes stupid people think they have a huge moustache.... hahaha
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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2004, 05:15:01 AM »
Yeah, that's true. I can't do that when i'm drawing. (well, yeah i can.)

Thanks. I hope to be an artist someday.

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2004, 05:18:02 AM »
A good work really.
I just find the eyes quite stange, maybe you should have put some white around it... Maybe not I don't know but this is already a really nice drawn (draw? " dessin" in french :p )
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« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2004, 05:25:14 AM »
Actually, she's supposed to be that way. In one part of my story, her eyes turn completly black. It's really scary.

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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2004, 05:28:28 AM »
You'll put a pic of it ?
Would like to see that ^^
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Re:A new drawing. Take a look!
« Reply #11 on: July 27, 2004, 05:29:25 AM »
I would have to make it, because i haven't thought about the thought, until now.  ;D

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« Reply #12 on: July 27, 2004, 05:36:37 AM »
erf I did not really understood what ya meant sorry
You didn't thought about the thought ???
(From the verb: think??? Oh my, I really suck in English when i want to...)
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« Reply #13 on: July 27, 2004, 05:38:16 AM »
Oops. Didn't mean to confuse you. I meant that i thought about the idea just now.

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« Reply #14 on: July 27, 2004, 05:41:01 AM »
Ah oki doki!
I really have to improve my English if I want to survive in this forum lol
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