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Fan Work => Fan Writings => Topic started by: Kazenoken on October 21, 2007, 05:15:19 AM

Title: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on October 21, 2007, 05:15:19 AM
like it says im just beginning to write poems so dont laugh at it and please give me some feedbacks thanks ;)

I've said that i wont bother her
but then why do i still look at her
i guess I'm not ready yet
I am not ready to forget

I just couldn't ignore my feelings
my feelings that is constantly changing
I told myself that I would give up but I cant
though in the end I still couldn't

I tried to forget, the things I have felt
because my heart hurts so much
but you can't lie to your self about how you feel
so all that I could do was to just watch

I would really like to do something
but I couldn't really do anything
I really am unworthy of such a thing
because in the end I could only do nothing




yeah its love
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: FallenOctober on October 22, 2007, 04:32:28 PM
Feel the same way, *sigh*, exact same way.
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on October 23, 2007, 11:11:42 PM
thats for my crush that i really really loved :'(
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: KujoSan on November 28, 2007, 09:27:45 AM
we really experienced the exact same thing...  :'(
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on December 02, 2007, 09:17:44 AM
it seems like you posted again what you have :P
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: KitsuneNoYume on April 14, 2008, 09:32:35 PM
o0oo....That's really good. I like it. =D

Good job.
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on April 16, 2008, 01:50:43 AM
thanks
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: jenniferLOVESyou on June 02, 2008, 10:06:50 AM
its really good. especially since you just started writing ^.^
you should definitely keep writing.

did you give her the poem?
or did you just write it about her?
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on June 03, 2008, 08:11:33 PM
thanks a lot
and she read it i saw her read it but i didnt give it to her she just borrowed that notebook which i had the poem because my notes are there
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: jenniferLOVESyou on June 04, 2008, 08:09:39 AM
awwwwwwwwww. did she love it??
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on June 04, 2008, 06:48:12 PM
i dont know but she said its pretty good since shes the one who taught me how to write a poem ~_~
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: jenniferLOVESyou on June 06, 2008, 09:56:19 AM
awwwwwww. thats cute ^.^
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: Kazenoken on June 15, 2008, 06:35:11 PM
then in the end i was rejected T__T
Title: Re: the poem of a begginer
Post by: dish112 on July 25, 2013, 12:17:25 PM
Beginner indeed. It's beautiful.

Yay I'm late to the party.  :-[