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Title: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: FallenOctober on April 15, 2007, 07:48:05 PM
I wrote this so I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I have. I loved the manga but was dissapointed because the ending was so crappy, or more along the lines of being so cheesy. I just wanted to make another story since Ichigo 100% will never have another sequel  :'(. Please R&R! I'll keep updating more and more each day or two, so please give me more time. And if you guys can, please like give me some names for the people I can add in the story. It would help because I'm not much of an creative person!

Disclaimer: Don't own Ichigo 100%, if I did that would be awesome.  ;)

Chapter 1: Jealousy

Manaka yawned softly; his voice seem to echo lightly throughout the room. Rubbing his eyes with the tips of his fingers, he glanced down to look at his sleeping beauty. That sleeping beauty was the love of his life, the one who he would always put first no matter what. Love was just like that, something you never want to give up on despite the consequences, heart aches, and the pain all together. Sometimes it was an roller coaster, sometimes it wasn't, but the joy of it after receiving love was the best of it all.

He watched Nishino Tsukasa's face slowly elevate up and down, as she breathed. He would just stay there at times, and just watch Nishino sleep so soundly. He reminisced the times of back when he was first dating Nishino, he was so nervous it was quite hiliarious. He was always afriad of making the first move, wondering what would happen; and the amazement of how his perverted mind could be go to such lengths, seeing as how the wind blow at the perfect time allowing him to take an quick glimpse at the girls panties.

He was truly a lucky guy, having three girls who truly loved him in and out regardless of the fact he wasn't special or anything. He looked like roadkill, was short, wasn't smart, nor did he have any special talents at sports of the sort. But maybe it was because he really cared for others, is why the girls saw the good side of him. And that was what truly mattered, Manaka laid back down on the pillow, as he turned his head to still see Nishino sound asleep. Not wanting to wake her up, he placed his hands behind the back of his head as he thought about life.

Toujou Aya, the girl who shared his dreams. The girl who was his first love, maybe even the one he truly wanted to be back then, even if he was going out with Nishino. Manaka wondered, 'what would've happened if I had let the relationship between me and Aya grow?' 'Would I be at the side of Aya Toujou and not Nishino?' This was an thought that always crossed his mind when he saw Nishino's cute face, he couldn't help but realize Toujou was an important woman in his life.

She shared his pain, his sweat, and his tears all rolled into one. She was his friend, no best friend, more than that, a companion. She was never selfish, she cared for others just as Manaka. Thats why this thought always crossed his mind, because it always seem to be this feeling that; he had truly broken Toujou's heart when he had declined her true love confession to him. Maybe, thats why Toujou rarely talks to Manaka that much anymore.

There could be another reason that she's busy, or she has something to do. But the feeling that etched at his skin, it were like needles that pierced his skin and made him feel numb. He remembered the sadness that was plastered on Toujou's face, that day when he told her he loved Nishino. It was the face he had seen back then, when they had first gone to their summer break. Toujou was crying in the rain, her hands clasped over the tree, and even if it was raining, Manaka could tell she was crying.

He could tell that she was tired of being an girl who wore a mask, who everyone thought she had no feelings. But she did. And she wore her feelings on her sleeve, and thats why when Manaka met Toujou's sad face, he never wanted to see it ever again. Never would he ever have to stare at the mask that Toujou wore, because it wasn't her.

"Junpei-kun?" Manaka startled; as he felt his face pulled forward Nishino's gleaming smiling face.

Nishino gently pursed her lips, and kissed Manaka in the lips once. Manaka caught off guard couldn't say anything, but he didn't need to, the moment he saw Nishino's happy face. He could feel his face in reflex just smile automatically, as Nishino hummed an pop tune.

Nishino asked quietly, her eyes casually studying Manaka's expression. "What were you thinking about?"

"Oh it's really nothing."

Nishino didn't seem convinced at all, but if she did, she did not show it.

"Well then, Junpei-kun you wouldn't mind doing a favor for me?" Asked Nishino sweetly, as she smiled.

"What?"

"Promise me you'll always love me."

Manaka was startled by this question, but he didn't object at it and he replied with a smile, "of course I will. I love you so much Nishino-chan."

Nishino giggled, as she cupped Manaka's face in her hands and kissed him.

Little did both of the happy couple know that one woman was watching them through a telescope, alongside one man who obviously did not feel happy at all about this.

"So what are we going to do about this? What's the plan?"

Kitaoji and Amachi at the viewpoint of where; they were seated on top of the building a few feet across from the apartment complex which housed Nishino and Manaka. Kitaoji seemed amused at Amachi's question, as she replied nonchalantly in an mock angry voice, "We break up Manaka-kun from Nishino. Then he goes out with me."

Amachi seemed to agree, but then his face turned red. "But what about me! What is my repayment? Why am I helping you out if I don't get something in return?"

Kitaoji smiled devilishy, "It's elementary Amachi. We break up Manaka, and somehow along the lines when I go out with Manaka, I'll convince him to tell Toujou that she should go out with you."

Amachi stood still for a moment, as he said nothing. Kitaoji sighed and answered the question in his mind, but with an annoyed tone. To top it off she said it to him as if he were an elementary kid, she made sure to pronounce each day clearly and very slowly. "Toujou still loves Manaka. And although she tries to forget Manaka, she still loves him truly just like me. You can't bring either one of us down! That's why if Manaka convinces her that it's okay to go out with you, she'll believe you because whatever Manaka says has to be right." Kitaoji smirked feeling her ego and her one step close to Manaka come so close in her clutches, she could feel it. In fact she felt it was all coming to her plans, as long as this moron agreed.

"I guess your right."

But Amachi felt bad, Manaka was a nice person. Would breaking them make Manaka feel the same way Amachi did when Toujou declared a few years ago, that she wasn't going out with either of them. And if Toujou did go out with her, he felt like it would be taking advantage of her. He remembered that Manaka was a very kind person, and he knew when Toujou chose neither that he and Manaka were in one way both the same. Two lover boys who got the worst rejection of their life.

'Me and Manaka must be the same, we got girls swarming around us, and not only that. We both know how it feels to be hurt, and even if I do look more dashing than him. Is it really worth it?'

Amachi got out of his; wishful thinking due to an very upset Kitaoji who obviously didn't enjoy being ignored.

" Pay attention! Say, you look decent, so why don't you have a girlfriend?" The question itself seemed to make Amachi himself wonder too, why didn't he decide to give up on Toujou and just settle down? Was it that hard to just give up on someone who didn't truly love her?

The picture of Toujou's smiling face decided the argument between himself after all, and he knew he wanted to be with her. Despite the consequences, and the aftermath, it was decided. Besides, what straight man could avoid such a goddess, a beauty?

Kitaoji snapped her fingers, after she saw the drool that began to leak out Amachi's mouth. 'And to think I thought he was the least person to get perverted.'

Amachi sighed running his mind over for a answer, as he ran his hand over his hair. "Because somewhere along the lines, I still like Toujou. I must be a sore loser, but I still love her. You probably don't understand how I feel do you?"

Kitaoji didn't say anything for a second or two, but she replied with sniffle as her eyes locked on the window which showed two shadows which seem to be embracing one another. "Actually I do know what you feel like."

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A/N: If you did like it, please review!



Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Waffo on April 16, 2007, 08:16:44 AM
I'm not a fan of Ichigo 100% but the writing is solid.  Maybe I can get the fanboy noobs here to review it.
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: darkbleach05 on May 02, 2007, 09:55:00 PM
w0w nice...i would likely to read it more of this... :)
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on May 10, 2007, 07:28:37 AM
nice but then why amchi it doesnt fit...
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: darkbleach05 on May 10, 2007, 09:29:33 AM
hahaha y?
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Waffo on May 10, 2007, 01:06:07 PM
hahaha y?

I'm sure it's not enjoyable to read any writing with bad or overly-abbreviated grammar.  Please at least try to spell some words out and have some actual content in your responses. 

Also, I'll POW this.

*stickies*
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: darkbleach05 on May 11, 2007, 10:12:14 PM
sorry about that...lately ive been carried away with chit chats...sorry T.T

and back to the topic..i really like it...but seems its not yet finished?
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on May 14, 2007, 07:04:51 AM
maybe hes not done yet...

hahaha y?

he just doesnt fit too good
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: FallenOctober on May 25, 2007, 10:19:13 PM
Oh sorry, I thought this website was closed down. Because when I submitted my second chapter of it... it got cancled, and it wouldn't save it as a draft. So I not only lost it, I couldn't figure out why the site wasn't working. I'll post chapter 2 up soon as possible, ASAP!
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on May 26, 2007, 07:14:14 AM
please submit the second chapter!!!

eh.. great job!! but as kaze said amachi doesnt fit..
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on May 28, 2007, 10:40:02 PM
hes too out of the cause
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on June 01, 2007, 10:10:44 PM
where is the next chapter?
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: FallenOctober on June 04, 2007, 06:53:59 PM
Sorry I was kind of studying, and I didn't have time plus I've been doin some other stuff and editing for my friend's band. Making song/lyrics, so I'm really sorry if I left you at a cliff hanger. And for Amachi's OOCness, everyone acts really OOC when there in love!

So without further ado, here it is!

Chapter 2: Being With You

Toujou pursed then bit her lips as; she stared at the invitation with a gentle worried and passive look on her face. Could she go? Slowly, she sighed unhappily.

'Manaka-kun. . .' Sighing again with a huff, she got up and gazed at her room. Staring at her achievements, awards, and recognition she had received, she realized all of this was thanks to Manaka. He was her inspiration, her fire, and her bright light in the darkness. Like a guardian angel, he seemed to be there for her all the time, that was exactly the Manaka she had come to fall in love with.

So why was reading the invitation giving her the feeling of crawling in her bed, and just staying for three years?

Looking at the letter she read it carefully. Angrily for the first time out of jealously she tossed the letter, just right before her eyes could even peer over it, as she felt tears drip out of her as she felt her eyes water and she let it all out.

"I love you Manaka-kun!"

Time had passed as her knees wrapped around her arms, and seconds, which soon turned to minutes. Then to hours, were spent just penvisely crying her heart out, and using up three boxes of tissues, and hearing herself cry. She knew she had done the right thing. Smiling for once ever since she had receive the engagment letter of Manaka and Nishino, she knew she had truly done the right thing. With compassion and happiness in her heart, and hoping for the best of Manaka.

She ripped the invitation letter apart, and knew it was time to let him go.
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Amachi stood sullen and silent, the bouquet of various, colorful, and exotic flowers were clenched firmly around his grasp. Staring at the small house which Toujou abided in, he felt a slight uneasiness. He wanted Toujou to have feelings for him back, and he knew he had truly lost her trust after his failed attempt at wooing her. And that was through forcing her to kiss him back, in his philosphy, it was attempted rape. Never again would he dare do such a thing to a woman, of such respectable beauty.

But why? Why did he truly love a girl like with such intensity? Was there no endless struggle to his morbid deeds? His addiction, his love, and his thirst for Toujou was too much for himself alone. But in the end, he wondered with slight curiosity and hope, that maybe he could truly make her love him.

Just once he would try this attempt again, and hope for the best.

Ambling towards the door; he felt his stomach swell up in anxiety. Clearing his throat he marched on, and as if it felt like hours; he raised his long and sweaty arms and knocked on the door. Once. Twice. And waited with his nerves all knotted up, and hoped she would answer and come to the door.

"I'm coming!" Said the usual expressive and perky voice of Toujou, as sound of echoing footsteps were heard.

Amachi could barely contain his excitement after not encountering Toujou for so long, it was as if it was just a dream. But he waited until he finally heard louder footsteps and knew she had finally arrived. Amachi took a deep breath, and to his sudden utter surprise saw the door open only to see.

Toujou. But she was not alone, to Amachi's horror he saw there was someone else by her side. And that someone was a man, white blond hair with blue crystal eyes,  Amachi could tell they were dating by the way the man had his arm around Toujou's waist. To Amachi, it was his world crashing down. All of this days spent and careful planning only to fall down to the hands of the inevitable, he knew, he knew goddamnit!

That she Toujou, of such beauty and grace, could not be alone by herself forever and that Amachi had foolishly waited so long. He had not captured the prize. Someone else had did, and it seemed to him that Toujou was happy by the smile on her face when she was alongside her man.

Toujou's face scrunched up in surprise and shock. "Amachi? W-W-What are you doing here?"

Amachi thinking in his own mind, hastily drew himself out of it. "W-W-W-Well you see . . ." Stuttered Amachi, as the man beside her, grew suspicious.

"Wait a second, why do you have flowers? Unless that's for me, and unless your an homosexual, or an salesman. You're obviously giving it to Toujou, aren't you?" The man's crisp voice made Amachi blush, because Amachi knew he was caught. Hook, line, and sinker.

"W-W-W-" Began Amachi as Toujou cut him off saying with a shrill voice. "Jaden! Don't be so suspicious! He's my friend! He probably just came to give me flowers because we haven't kept up in touch, is that right Amachi?"

Amachi stood in bizare wilderment as Toujou was defending him, and he could only shamelessly hide the truth for now. "Y-Y-Yes! That's the truth, I came here becaue I haven't seen Toujou in a while. And I didn't want to lose her friendship, and so I wanted to greet her with these nice flowers."

Jaden seemed to soften his gaze, as he nodded and apologized apologetically. "Please forgive me, I just thought of it like that. Please really forgive me! Just come right in," offered Jaden as he smiled appraisingly, opening the wooden door wide so Amachi could come in. But Amachi shook his head, and replied, "I got to go. I got something to do," lied Amachi as he felt himself feel uncomfortable.

Toujou hearing this immediatley asked, or literally begged for Amachi to come, but Amachi being stubborn immediatley gave Toujou the flowers and ran. Toujou caught off guard could only see the backside of Amachi as he turned around fled, Toujou not catching the deep sob of Amachi. Stood astonished and could only hear the voice of Jaden commenting on Amachi's behavior.

"Weird guy he is, I can understand he's your friend. But the way he left, well, I don't want to put it like that but it was really strange. I just hope you guys can make up again," said Jaden soothingly as he brushed his lips on Toujou's cheek.

"I guess . . ." Toujou agreed, as she pulled Jaden come to him and they embraced in soft kisses. But as they began to kiss, Toujou opened her eyes and peered at the trash box which contained the invitation on the 16th to Manaka's wedding. Considering it, she decided she should go. After all Manaka himself would love her to be there. Smiling as she giggled happily, and allowed Jaden to carry her to their bedroom for a hot makeout.
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Amachi now alone realized it was time just like Toujou had did to him and Manaka to let go, he had dwelled too much on trying to gain her love. He had let go off the fans or girls who truly loved him, inside and outside. Sighing, he walked outside only to be met with raindrops. But it was good, because as he was walking on the streets alongside other people carrying umbrellas. Or people grumbling about the weird weather, some droplets on his face which slid down, weren't really raindrops at all.




Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on June 05, 2007, 05:25:22 AM
hey can you tell me what kind of man is Jaden??

and toujou with... ???
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on June 05, 2007, 07:56:02 PM
nice but its a world crash for amchi...
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: FallenOctober on June 07, 2007, 01:14:39 PM
Jaden is the type of man who's nice, but can get really mean if he gets jealous. But don't worry Amachi will have a happy ending in the end, I'm going to make him kind of the main character of this story and then reintroduce Manaka, because I feel Amachi didn't get that much of a role and people are left wondering of what he has become.
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on June 07, 2007, 10:26:24 PM
oh and doesnt toujou fit with an eatern guy than a western guy? ???
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on June 08, 2007, 06:24:33 AM
poor him...

waiting the next chapter maybe?  ;D

good writing..
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: FallenOctober on June 08, 2007, 07:11:08 PM
Haha Jaden is white, but he's one of those white people you see in Anime where they're blond and in some cases act like asians. If you get what I mean haha! And thanks for commenting, it makes my reasoning to make more and more chapters fun  ;)
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on June 10, 2007, 02:26:25 AM
thanks also for making such good stories oh and can i have a copy of it?
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on June 13, 2007, 02:29:17 AM
hey your story is absolutely interesting!!
once you finished, can i have a copy??
before yanime is closed..
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Scar Face on July 02, 2008, 04:20:16 PM
nice one but could have been wonder full if the story was writen in a proper way... it seems you don't have much experience in writing fanfictions just see mine for example..
http://ichigo-100-fanfiction.blogspot.com/
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Waffo on July 07, 2008, 06:07:39 AM
before yanime is closed..

Quite optimistic, there.
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: Kazenoken on July 07, 2008, 05:41:06 PM
agreed well im hoping that it wont
Title: Re: Everlasting Love: A New Saga- Ichigo 100% Fanfic
Post by: KujoSan on February 16, 2010, 03:30:59 AM
hey, let's make yanime alive, again, like before..  :'(

Waffo: Something between advice and a warning.  Please refrain from bumping old threads to life for an unrelated reason.