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Offline Zackies

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-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« on: December 06, 2003, 08:34:33 AM »
The Song Of The Fallen

I stand in this place..
Hopeless and alone..
I’ve lost the race..
For my sins.. I can’t atone..

I’ve fallen..
I can’t see the light..
Only the darkness..
Only the night..

My life have slipped through my fingers..
Death is the only thing that lingers..
I can’t be rescued.. I can’t be saved..
Forevermore I will be enslaved..

Now I can see the end..
I take my final breath..
This life has been a horrible nightmare..
That I will never forget..

Live this life while you have it..
Because you never know when it might slip away..[/I]


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The above poem is from my new poem compilation I’m about to release.. These titles may or may not make it to the new one.
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The Song Of The Fallen

Indispensable
 
The Echo Of Dormant Emotion

A Heart Of Stone-A Mind Of Darkness

I Gaze Into The Eyes of Beauty-The Eyes Of Deceit Gaze Back

And The Spirit Wept

Forevermore

Sustained By Blood
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Well.. Comments on the above poem would be nice.

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Re:-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« Reply #1 on: December 06, 2003, 08:00:13 PM »
*huggles Zeos*

Great as always.  Touching and thought-provoking.  One of your best, I believe. ^_^
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Re:-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« Reply #2 on: December 06, 2003, 08:41:34 PM »
awesome poem. kicks ass just like everything you write. i admire you. *gives cookie*

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Re:-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2003, 06:04:21 PM »
I didn't see this at all because I couldn't go on the internet at all this weekend!  I'm sorry!  It rhymes and has a point moral thingie too!  I like it lots!

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Re:-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2003, 11:08:12 AM »
Thanks everyone..

I know that when I post poems.. At least three people will comment on them.

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Re:-Preview Of My New Compilation-
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2003, 02:04:15 PM »
u should kno that more than 3 ppl will comment! it wuz awesome!
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'Cause I don't think that they'd understand.
When everything's made to be broken,
I just want you to know who I am...

 

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