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Offline Night Priestess

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a bunch of new stuff
« on: February 16, 2004, 08:30:27 AM »
A dozen black roses
Lie forgotten upon the grave.
A blood moon rises.

Rows of stone crosses,
Cast srimson in the night,
Stand their silent sentry.

Into the ages they resist,
A last defense for the dead.
A single crimson tear falls.



As the words wash over, I remember.
Everything happened so fast.

I remember the pain,
The first time it happened,
The pain at the change.

I remember the trials,
More pain.
At least I know I'm real.

I close my eyes,
Trying to block it all out.
Weariness overcomes me.

I snap back to consciousness again.
I hear,
But I can't listen.

The blackness overcomes,
And I embrace it.
It must end tonight.



Throughout My Time

The emotions circle.
I keep them at bay,
Yet one slpis past my guard.

I cannot stand it,
Crimson tears begin to fall.
I want it all to end.

The memories resurface again.
The blood draining away,
The pain I felt instead of pleasure.

Never can I go back,
I cannot return to who I was,
No matter how much I long to.

Forever am I cursed
To wander the outside edges,
But never to become involved.

The river of crimson
Overflows its banks.
My misery replaces the outflow.


I'll be posting the rest of the stuff soon!




Thanks to Chaos for the siggy!!!


Well, I don't want the world to see me,
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand.
When everything's made to be broken,
I just want you to know who I am...

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2004, 02:32:32 PM »
time i chipped the ice off this..

*chink chink*

goodie a poem , with no replies? how rude..


*reads*


ive struck gold here , and for some reason no has seemed to notice  ???

the first one a powerfull instalment to your collection , probably the best yet, the second i thought was a little slow to reach me at the start but the last 2-3 paragraphs proved more engrossing

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To me, clowns aren't funny. In fact, they're kind of scary. I've wondered where this started and I think it goes back to the time I went to the circus, and a clown killed my dad. - Jack Handy

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2004, 02:38:03 PM »
yay! a reply! thanx! i really like the first one, 2.
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Well, I don't want the world to see me,
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand.
When everything's made to be broken,
I just want you to know who I am...

Offline Final Saiyyan

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #3 on: March 02, 2004, 02:43:47 PM »
yup , steven will probably be on sometime soon too , the first one just sparked off more imagination in me , but the second one was still good ,

with poems its like making fire with flint , you have to clash words  togehter the right way to start something good ,


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To me, clowns aren't funny. In fact, they're kind of scary. I've wondered where this started and I think it goes back to the time I went to the circus, and a clown killed my dad. - Jack Handy

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2004, 08:04:08 PM »
I read all the poems here, even if I don't reply ^^ what irks me more than no replies is when my poems sit for days and days with '2 views' -_-;;

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2004, 12:10:54 PM »
my poems get replies , mr hot poker makes sure of that

but its sad they go off into oblivion with little or no replies,
like this one almost did, mines got one good review for my first poem and a mediocre reply for the second which i rushed and mispelt like God knows what..

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To me, clowns aren't funny. In fact, they're kind of scary. I've wondered where this started and I think it goes back to the time I went to the circus, and a clown killed my dad. - Jack Handy

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Re:a bunch of new stuff
« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2004, 12:39:06 PM »
i always read the new stuff. most of the time, i reply, unless some1 already said it...
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Well, I don't want the world to see me,
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand.
When everything's made to be broken,
I just want you to know who I am...